• “It has become appallingly obvious that our technology has exceeded our humanity.” one of the many famous quotes by Albert Einstein. Albert is known for being one of the brightest minds of the 20th century. A

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    Every character in The Book of The Unknown Americans by Cristina Henriquez has had the foundations of their being crafted by the people they are surrounded by. Their motivations, personality, and traits a

  • I. Family is an integral role to the plot of the book of unknown Americans. three characters in particular has been affected by their families sphere of influence the most. Maribel, Mayor, and garret. Thesis: Family shapes who we are as a person whether for better or for worse.
    II. Maribel has a very protective mother and a loving father, her…[Read more]

  • revise. I fixed the picture to be on top of the essay

  • my proposal for the essay will focus on the subject of family. the structure of every character in this book revolves around what they experienced with their families, for better or for worse. my essay will explore this important theme of family and how their actions or events that have happened to them have affected a few key characters that I…[Read more]

  • The scene I chose to draw depicted mayor in his struggles during school. Mayor was a huge target for bullying in his school. He got bullied many times and the book gives a glimpse as to what that was like for him. The first time we read this is during his experience in the locker room. A main focus of the book is bullying and what effects it can…[Read more]

  • reflect on the writing process for your argument.

    I explained about various processes people can do to help with climate change, started with general information about the history and what benefits it can offer to people and the planet.

    what are the strengths and weaknesses?

    the length of the essay could have been longer by about another…[Read more]

  • The biggest problem that endangers humanity and planet Earth itself is our rapidly changing climate. Many countries are taking the initiative to stop the process and they are making progress to fix the problem. H

    • reflect on the writing process for your argument.

      I explained about various processes people can do to help with climate change, started with general information about the history and what benefits it can offer to people and the planet.

      what are the strengths and weaknesses?

      the length of the essay could have been longer by about another page, could have used that extra length to give more options as to what anybody could to to help against climate change.

      what did you do well? where did you struggle?

      I felt like I had a clear message and thesis statement. I struggled with finding different and distinctive solutions any one person could do to help the cause.

    • revise. I fixed the picture to be on top of the essay

  • Who is your audience?
    People who are looking to help the planet, one’s who understand what the problem is and is looking for what they can do to help.

    What do they value?

    Nature, scientific evidence, data, longevity

    Are your reasons in line with those values?

    Yes, the people who know climate change is a real issue understand the e…[Read more]

  • The dangers of climate change is a problem on a global scale, while many countries are now taking the initiative to fixing this life changing issues, it will unfortunately take at lot of time and resources to do it. Healing the planet is a group effort and everyone has a part to play in order to get us closer to that goal. stopping down climate…[Read more]

  • They would have to present their side with facts and/or a strong opinion themselves. A good way to have my opinion possibly change is through a difference of perspective. Or a subject matter that is more gray rather than black and white could lead to a more challenging argument to lead people closer to your side.

    TED TALK.
    What stood out to…[Read more]

  • 1. What did you do well? Explain
    I thought I did a good job in having different examples to explain the importance of the two skils needed for growth.
    2. What did you struggle with? explain
    I had many different examples pertaining to my topic, but it was hard to come up with many different points of life to appoint the skills of accountability…[Read more]

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    Throughout these past few years I have learned a couple of invaluable skills from my close group of friends. It’s not something that is a physical skill involving the body, but it’s a mental thing that I can

    • 1. What did you do well? Explain
      I thought I did a good job in having different examples to explain the importance of the two skils needed for growth.
      2. What did you struggle with? explain
      I had many different examples pertaining to my topic, but it was hard to come up with many different points of life to appoint the skills of accountability and perseverance. also a strong thesis.
      3. What grade do you think you deserve and why? justify your answer
      I believe that my paper is around a B- paper. good structure, length, and I believe I got my point across well. but I think I could have used stronger details in my paper, more examples for instance.

  • what I want to show with my narrative is that Perseverance and accountability will be needed in every person for the rest of their lives. it’s invaluable, and it cannot be replaced with laziness and shortcuts.

  • I plan on changing the subject on my essay. my previous one was about my major of choice. now my essay will be on how i learned about perseverance and accountability from my friends.

  • My best essay was a research paper on Joshua tree during my geology two class. The paper was simple, just talk about what you learned on the trip. What was your favorite part, your least favorite part. I chose this as my best essay not because it was my best when it comes from an academic perspective, but because it was visiting an area that would…[Read more]

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