• “Cheerrsss!,” the one word when you hear it, and you know some people are having a great time where every they are. Alcohol is a multibillion dollar company that wants to make as much profit from people as

  • In the book of Genesis, it speaks about how Adam and Eve ate the forbidden fruit in the garden of Eden, which was a metaphor that they should have not eaten the fruit because of pleasure they received would be

  • Mayor knows that she has some problems with her, but that doesn’t stop him from truly loving her. The real reason is that Maribel parents do not know how to cope with their love, if it is true.
    1.Intro/thesis about love
    2.whats going on with maribel and mayor
    3.a story about about true love
    4. compare the true love between TR and maribel a…[Read more]

  • my topic is going to be about love or bullying. the reason why i do not know which to pick is cause both topics are very difficult in life. i would need to do some research on reason why people fall in love or why are kids getting bullied.

  • the strengths behind my essay are that i talk about the problem, that i go over the situation i state. most of the situation are held behind with vast amount of information. my weakness were probably my grammar. i had put a lot of effort into my easy, even renting a book from our local library. one of my weakness is that some of my paragraph are a…[Read more]

  • Transgender people allowed to fight the battle that’s away from home, but now the new battle is at home fighting for their right. On August 25, 2017, the president, Donald J. Trump, signed a ban against new incom

    • the strengths behind my essay are that i talk about the problem, that i go over the situation i state. most of the situation are held behind with vast amount of information. my weakness were probably my grammar. i had put a lot of effort into my easy, even renting a book from our local library. one of my weakness is that some of my paragraph are a little bit long. other than that, i think i hit the argument pretty well, explaining the problem and how to fix it.

  • i want revise my essay and change some of the keys points. i want to use more ethos in it, and get my conclusion down better.

  • Friend: Whats up you fuck, I gotta ask you for a favor? Lend ya boi 20 bucks.
    Grandma: hey grandma its Chris, I was wondering if it would be possible if I could borrow 20 bucks for school supply’s.
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    Transgenders are being banned from the military to be allowed to join. That they are being discriminated for who they…[Read more]

  • What would someone have to do to change your opinion on something?

    They would have to have really great facts about what they are trying to persuade me about? Or maybe have a gun pointed to my head. But mostly they would need something that will take my interest away.
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    She is a very strong independent woman. She…[Read more]

  • what i think i did well was, the picture because they really come together with my essay. also i think i did really well on my title because its mixes well with my story. my only struggle i had was changing some word that i used excessively but i change it. so i don’t believe i didn’t mess up to much in my essay. i believe that i deserve a A+…[Read more]

  • to understand that i can do things on my own. that sometime you don’t need your sponser to help you. that they do help you with everything accomplish. its important to realize that making moves on your own matters.

  • There has always been an old wise tale saying, “Like father like son.” I was really close to my father, especially with automobiles. I would never forget the point in my life when my father knew that I, was ready

    • what i think i did well was, the picture because they really come together with my essay. also i think i did really well on my title because its mixes well with my story. my only struggle i had was changing some word that i used excessively but i change it. so i don’t believe i didn’t mess up to much in my essay. i believe that i deserve a A+ because i did a great job on my 4 photos, that my title went great with my essay, all of my paragraph went well and also lend to the next paragraph well, i also included quiet a bit of ideologue. hope you enjoy my essay.

  • I am going to add one extra paragraph about my father. to explain about who he was, how he was, and how he became to be. also revise about my grammar. then see if i can add some more dialogue. the revise again too see if i have anymore changes to make.

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