• As the young Charlotte McKinney is making her way through a fresh vegetable market she is passing by tents of fruit wearing booty shorts and a bikini top showing all the good god gave her, her titees are out,

  • The border is wide open for cartels and terrorists. Secure our border now. Build a massive wall and deduct the costs from Mexican foreign aid says president Donald Trump on twitter. Racism has been going on for

  • Intro: introducing the book and my topic with a story from the book
    Thesis: a relevant issue in our society is that mexicans have been targeted of being bad people since passed years just like in The Book of Unknown Americans.
    Not all americans who come to the US are part of a gang or rapist.
    Evidence from sources…[Read more]

  • my strength is that I know older people care a lot about their families and I talk about that my weakness would be that my topic is no very common
    I struggled trying to find good sources and I did well in targeting my adience

  • Imagine if your grandmother killed someone, would you feel guilty? Should you be the one who decides when to take the car keys away.? According to Gold, Aaron in “14 million americans were involved in a

    • my strength is that I know older people care a lot about their families and I talk about that my weakness would be that my topic is no very common
      I struggled trying to find good sources and I did well in targeting my adience

  • The elderly people who are still driving and putting others in danger age 70 and up.
    They value their families, their security, of course their life, and law.
    I want to change one of my reasons also to make a better intro and conclusion and still better my body paragraphs

  • car accidents are caused by people all ages, yet we should take into consideration that seniors are more often the ones who hinder roads. No more danger behind wheels. How many car accidents been caused by seniors in the U.S.? My audience would be someone who can pass the law were seniors have to pass a test and be evaluated to see if they are…[Read more]

  • I think my topic was good and I give good examples.
    I struggled the with the structure I feel like it’s still a little messy.
    I think I deserve a B- because Its not perfect and I am missing things, yet it’s a good topic and story.

  • Something you must do to convince me about something is to show me prove of what you’re talking about from credible sources and credible people not only give me your opinion show me credible evidence and good proof.

  • Do you speak?
    Flipping through the pages I realized I didn’t know how to write, read, or speak English I was raised in Mexico and lived there for ten years, at the age of sixteen I traveled to Ontario

    • I think my topic was good and I give good examples.
      I struggled the with the structure I feel like it’s still a little messy.
      I think I deserve a B- because Its not perfect and I am missing things, yet it’s a good topic and story.

  • The point of my narrative is to tell people how I learned to speak English and all the work and process I went through. Who helped me and how I did it all the strategies I used in case someone need help or can use them as well. It’s important because without all this knowledge I wouldn’t be where I am today and wouldn’t have the things I do t…[Read more]

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