• When you have someone you love, you would do anything for them to make them happy, to see that smile on their face, and make them feel special because you believe they deserve the best things in the world. What

  • Why do immigrants come to America? Immigrants comes to America as a safe haven, for education, job opportunities, health care, and for the future of their children. In The Book of the Unknown Americans by Cristina

  • Thesis Statement:
    Why do immigrants come to America? Immigrants come to America for a safe haven, education, jobs or career, opportunity, health, and for their children’s future.

  • I. Introduction/Thesis
    a. Why do immigrants come to America?
    i. Safe haven, education, jobs/career, opportunity, health, children’s future

    II. Safe Haven
    a. Bad situation back in homeland
    i. Government taking away human rights
    ii. Killings/genocide and wars, revolution
    iii. Financial burdens, difficulty making money to s…[Read more]

  • The picture that I drew was the scene where Garret picked on Maribel after she got off the bus on a rainy day, took away her sunglasses, was name calling her, and was trying to put her hands on her. Mayor witnessed the scene and went to rescue Maribel, in turn, he ended up getting punched by Garret but was able to escape. I chose to draw this…[Read more]

  • Lynn Son commented on the post, Vaccinate Your Kids! 3 months ago

    My strengths on this essay was the information I provided with visual aids. My weaknesses is probably on how I explained and elaborated the information along with repetition on certain issues. I did well on my citations and was able to formulate the information in the essay. I struggled with trying to expand the information and going into depth on…[Read more]

  • Why vaccinate children? Wouldn’t it be better to just have the children create their own immunity? Doesn’t it make the kids sick? Vaccinating children has been a controversial issue for a few years now. There is

    • My strengths on this essay was the information I provided with visual aids. My weaknesses is probably on how I explained and elaborated the information along with repetition on certain issues. I did well on my citations and was able to formulate the information in the essay. I struggled with trying to expand the information and going into depth on the topics.

  • Audience:
    My audience are parents who don’t want to vaccinate their children.
    They value the safety and health of their children.
    My reasons are in line with those values because I describes the safety and protection that vaccines can provide for their children’s health.
    Quick Write:
    The changes that I am going to make to revise my sol…[Read more]

  • My solution argument proposal will be about vaccinations for children and why it should be a requirement. The problem is parents not wanting to vaccinate their kids. My audience will be parents who refuse to vaccinate their kids. The possible solution is to reduce the amount of children not vaccinated.

  • I believe what I did well on my essay would be the chronological order of the essay. I struggled with the proper explanation and description of certain scenes along with trying to figure out a title for my essay. I also struggled with trying to find a good picture that would be relevant and show importance to the essay. I feel that I deserve a B…[Read more]

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               When it comes to babysitting a child, it holds great responsibility of being a caregiver. The challenges I have faced taught me to better understand my niece’s and nephew’s needs and how to take ca

    • I believe what I did well on my essay would be the chronological order of the essay. I struggled with the proper explanation and description of certain scenes along with trying to figure out a title for my essay. I also struggled with trying to find a good picture that would be relevant and show importance to the essay. I feel that I deserve a B or a C grade at least because this wasn’t my best paper that I have written. I feel that I have some missing components and detail that I may have left out and the points of what should the reader have taken out of my story, what was the lesson. I feel as though I have written more of a story rather than a lesson or point to it and that it was boring.

  • The point of my narrative is to show that experience with trial and error can help better yourself in preparation for future experience. Readers should learn that based on experience with babysitting a child, it can help prepare you to be a parent when you have your own kids. It matters because when it comes to being a new parent, you are…[Read more]

  • The changes that I will be making to my first rough draft are that I will be adding more dialogues to my paragraphs such as what my sister advised me to do when taking care of my niece. I will also be describing the scene of how my niece was so distracted and watching her favorite show. I will also be adding in the feedback from my peers such as…[Read more]

  • Literacy Narrative Proposal

    I would like to write my literacy narrative on my experience as an aunt and a caregiver for my nieces and nephews. My literacy sponsors are my siblings and myself. This experience has given me an idea about what it is like to become a parent and the responsibilities it entails. Through these experiences, it has…[Read more]

  • Literacy Sponsor
    My literacy sponsor is myself and my siblings. I have 10 nieces and nephews and having the opportunity to be a part of their lives and helping with raising a most of them by babysitting has been a great joy. It has taught me what to expect when I first have a child of my own one day and given me the experience of what it will…[Read more]

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