•      There are so many commercials being aired on television today and most of them are forgotten right after viewing it. The only way to help make a commercial to be remembered by people is by making it ei

  •      “Between the three of us we only knew the most minimal English, words and phrases we had picked up from the tourists that traveled to Patzcuaro and in the shops that catered to them, and we couldn’t read t

  • My topic that I am deciding to write about is between the language barrier and how it is hard to communicate when knowing only one language. Yes, I would have to do some research about how difficult it is to learn a second language. The language barrier caught my attention when reading the book but also this morning I experienced how difficult it…[Read more]

  • from the book I drew the scene about the mom Alma talking to a police officer. She was trying to explain what the boy was doing to her daughter. I picked this scene because I want to talk about the guilt Alma has in the book and how it is affecting Alma’s daughter.

  • My weaknesses for this essay was finding research that was narrowing down to young drivers. A big problem I had was giving the right amount of detail and explaining the problem toward young drivers. One of my strengths for my essay was highlighting the problem but also stressing the solution for the problem. I think that I did well with putting…[Read more]

  •      When first learning how to drive it is scary and most people are nervous. The more a person drives the easier it gets and people become less nervous. When a driver reaches that point of not being so ne

    • My weaknesses for this essay was finding research that was narrowing down to young drivers. A big problem I had was giving the right amount of detail and explaining the problem toward young drivers. One of my strengths for my essay was highlighting the problem but also stressing the solution for the problem. I think that I did well with putting emotion in my essay to help young drivers understand the importance of the solution. I also explained reasons why young drivers need to realize that the solution is much needed. I struggled with finding the research with information stating the ages of the young drivers. I eventually did find a lot of information from researching but I very much struggled with it.

  • Who is your audience? My audience are people ages 17-24 who are distracted drivers.
    What do they value?
    Are your reasons in line with those values? No not all of my reasons are in line and I have to go back and fix my reasoning and the research for my solution.

    The changes that I am going to make to revise my solution is I am going to add…[Read more]

  • My topic is going to be about texting and driving. Many people cannot live without their phones being right next to them. That is a big problem when it comes to having a phone in front of your face while driving. Most people know how dangerous it is and yet it doesn’t cross their minds to put it away until they have reached their location. P…[Read more]

  • I am a stubborn person so it would take a lot of effort to convince me to change my opinion on something. Someone can show me evidence, examples, and proof but I am not an easy person to convince so I’m not too sure what would convince me to change my mind. I would have to really believe what they are saying or showing me in order to change my o…[Read more]

  • I sent you an email of my drafted essay to be revised. You left comments on my essay and i followed your advice and fixed the areas that needed to be fixed. I think that i did well on picking my topic and also brain storming about what i was going to talk about. I struggled with my introduction paragraph and i also struggled very much on…[Read more]

  • Growing up I faced many hardships resulting in having a rough childhood. I learned how to be independent basically on my own. I had to go through trial and error to figure things out. My life was like a twisting

    • I sent you an email of my drafted essay to be revised. You left comments on my essay and i followed your advice and fixed the areas that needed to be fixed. I think that i did well on picking my topic and also brain storming about what i was going to talk about. I struggled with my introduction paragraph and i also struggled very much on explaining in detail about some situations in my narrative. I think i deserve to receive a B on my narrative because i worked really hard on it and put in a lot of effort and fixed it a few times also i asked for your help and comments and also went back again and fixed it.

  • The point or lesson of my literacy is how I had to learn to become independent. I explained the reasons why I was not independent and what I went through to figure out that it was important to be independent. The readers should learn or take away from my essay that no matter what your life was like or even how your life is now you as a person can…[Read more]

  • After I got my draft looked at by one of my peers I noticed that I had some things to look over and fix. I have to fix my first sentence to my introduction. The second paragraph I have a few spelling errors that I will be fixing. In the fourth paragraph I need to change a few sentences, add dialogue, and add more description. In the fifth…[Read more]

  • Literacy Sponsor
    My literacy sponsor is myself and my older cousin. When I was 3 months old my parents gave me to my grandparents. And as many of you know grandparents love to spoil their adorable grandchildren. So that was me I was always being spoiled and got whatever I wanted. But as I got older it was not such a good thing and started getting…[Read more]

  • I had to learn how to be a first-time parent. I had my son a month before my twenty third birthday! I had an idea and somewhat knew how to watch children but I was also able to give them back to their parents. Having my own child was a very difficult experience for me. I learned from family and friends on how to care for my baby when he was born…[Read more]

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